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Submitted: September 1, 2009
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warrior u: harv the 2nd 12by ~hot-choc

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i've colored till page 16 but it doesn't make a good cliffhanger or chapter end so you have to wait till i've finished all of it

Critique by ~SynDuo Sep 2, 2009, 2:22:11 PM

The coloring in the middle just makes this work nicely, I personally kinda wished that style was used throughout the pages.

The expressions are great here and consistent with the content of each panel, however my only complaint would be the 3rd panel, its minor but it could have used a different angel to show the unicorn's blood lust face more, I only mention this due the fact the flow of the panels would have probably worked out a bit better, but thats my only complaint.

Overall I'm really loving the coloring here and it just is toned just at the right lighting to set the mood better.

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