Really good! I like it!

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"Higher idiots do paint with cold light and hot shade." ~Dylan Thomas

Aww, they're cute, and your last name doesn't suck. It's not like people are going to call you by your last name your whole life.

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I need a new signiture..Oh, lookie that!

GAH! i love the style and coloring. ^_^

JuJuuu ~

This is great, you can really tell a lot of work went into it. The characters have a lot of personality, which is great! Of course, your work usually has a lot of personality, because you're skill and style just does that. Because you're awesome.
The only problem seems to be I can't tell where the light source is. There's a bright spot to the right, but Bubble-Gum Boy seems to be lit from above, while Smoker seems to be lit from the lightsource on the right... (Sorry, I don't know which one is Jophaniel and which is Carlton... I'm really bad with names to begin with ^.^;
I'm thinking the highlight/darkness around them is just a framing technique, so I won't factor it into the shadow critique-y. None the less, a great picture, with a lot of personality...
In other news, I think Aisha Thani is a cool name. But, then again, I'm exposed daily to surnames like Baker and Banning and Rodriguez, so something a little more exotic is always eye catching...

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Feral Fiction
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well the light source is supposed to be above middle ie the lamp post their leaning on , but i keep messing up when the light source is up, sorry
jophaniel is bubble-gum boy

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"see you in disney-land"- a serial killer

Wow, rhis is absolutely amazing. You can really tell a lot of work went into the picture. x) Great job.

The coloring on this is really impressive, the tones and colors you've used match the sense of the lighting well, with the dull orange tint everything has from the streetlight. I particularly like how you've done the highlights on the characters that pick out certain details quite strongly. Lovely work.

cool .. great work